Tuesday, March 28, 2006

The Narrator

"See the split in the peak there? That's where the crater is, but just to the right of that is the glacier field. Now watch as the storm pattern creeps over that way and then races across. Right about :::there::: is where the first lightning will strike. You watch, you'll see."

I listened from a wooden porch swing facing the Front Range of the Rocky Mountains. Every summer. While Mom fretted about hail damage to her Better Boy tomato plants, Dad and I would swing and he would narrate the storm's predictable -- yet oddly majestic -- passage from the mountains to our west across the wide plains of eastern Colorado and into Nebraska.

Later, much later, I learned that severe thunderstorms can be dangerous. Funny how all those years I never noticed.

22 Comments:

At 10:27 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I love thunderstorms. But your mention of the Rockies reminds me of when I was a nanny in Denver. The almost-daily thunderstorm always seemed to pass through during the 3-year-old's nap time. She would come out of her room and say, "Shawkey, I'm gared (scared). I don't wike sundstorms."

 
At 3:46 AM, Blogger Mr. Bloggerific Himself said...

The boy and I were in the kitchen together when he was about three. A big storm was brewing, and he was being very brave and didn't let it bother him. At one point, I was in mid-sentence and BOOM this huge explosion of thunder hit, like it was on my back porch...just inches behind my back. I jumped like somebody had just driven through the wall and that's when he started to cry. I gave him a big hug and told him that even big boys get scared.

 
At 5:34 AM, Blogger Nina said...

Smile, there is no doubt about it summer here on the Front Range. Means thunderstorms, lightning, and many times hail. In the 30 years I have been here there are too many times to count. The times the hail stones have been as big as golf balls. So much of it, you looked outside and it looks like it has snowed. Or the snow plows coming out in July to clear the hail off the road. Or the lightning right above you so you were in for a fantastic light show. Or the rumble of the foothills as the thunder was coming over them.

But most of all darling, I love the way your dad. . . LOVED his little girl!

 
At 5:48 AM, Blogger Unknown said...

I love that post. Simple, yet full of underlying emotions.

Sweet Pea always says "Mom, did you see the funder?"

 
At 6:22 AM, Blogger I'm not here. said...

You have a wonderful way with words.

 
At 7:01 AM, Blogger Unknown said...

I love thunderstorms too. I lived in Colorado for 7 years and I miss them - we don't get them here (at least in my part of the state).

Mr. B - great story!

 
At 7:15 AM, Blogger kat said...

i love this, shari.

 
At 8:04 AM, Blogger Mr. Bloggerific Himself said...

Thanks Jim :) Our weather seems to be getting worse as the years go by. I'll send a couple thunder boomers your way.

 
At 8:52 AM, Blogger eclectic said...

Sharkey: "Shawkey" -- that's my new favorite name for you. I'm afraid I shall have to use it exclusively from now on! Too cute!

Bloggy: OK, I don't know what's gotten into you the last day or so, but you're on a mission to make me all sentimental and stuff, aren't you? That's the sweetest story.

Rose: Awwww, you're so nice to me!

Nina: Thank you, sweetie. He did, and I'm still learning how incredibly valuable that is.

CK: I have actually never seen "funder" -- but that little Sweet Pea is too cute!

M/D: ***blush***

Cristin: Ah! How could I not have known?! Thanks!

Jim: Colorado does know how to throw a T-storm party, doesn't it?! Looks like Bloggy's gonna send us some of his, though I'm not too sure about the Kenn-tucky variety...

Kat: :::speechless::: That's got to be just about my favorite compliment, ever.

Bloggy: Um, no thanks on the Kennnn-tucky storms. I'm a-skairt.

 
At 9:36 AM, Blogger Squirl said...

I've always loved storms. Not smart enough to be scared of them, I guess. My favorite part of the story was how your father told you about them. So sweet. So was Mr B's story.

And now I finally know what HAB means.

 
At 9:50 AM, Blogger eclectic said...

Squirl: That's my favorite part of the story as well. Thank you.

It looks like Bloggy's getting all smart-ass deficient on us. Should we be worried?

 
At 10:05 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

The storm in the mountains: such an awesome image.

When you're IN the mountains, the thunder can echo and echo for twenty seconds. I forgot about that until you tweaked my memory. Thanks.

 
At 10:50 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I absolutely love thunderstorms, when i'm safe and can run inside if I need to.

They are so cleansing, almost healing to me.

I never knew what HAB was either. Now I do! YEA!

 
At 10:59 AM, Blogger limpy99 said...

Thunderstorms are great. And perfectly safe until you cana actually smell the electricity from the lightning. Then it's time to go in.

 
At 11:07 AM, Blogger pack of 2 said...

I loved thunderstorms when I was a kid...now I know what they are capable of.

Cristin is correct with her HAB explanation.

It is Pissy's way of saying she loves you.

Shelly

 
At 2:11 PM, Blogger Mr. Bloggerific Himself said...

Smart-ass deficient?

In his best John "The Duke" Wayne: That'll be the day.

 
At 2:12 PM, Blogger Mr. Bloggerific Himself said...

You know me Eeeclectic, I got keep things changing. Gotta be posting silly vids and photos, odd songs and poems and stories that you never quite know which way I'm going. :)

 
At 3:39 PM, Blogger eclectic said...

Peefer: Glad I could offer tweaking assistance. Y'know, memory is usually the first thing to go... should I be worried?

Lawbrat: I'm so glad I was not alone in my ignorance! Yay for Cristin!

Limpy: The voice of experience, perhaps?

Shelly: Isn't Pissy just a crack-up?!

Bloggy (x2): Yeah, I'm starting to suspect a little deficiency on the smart-ass side of things, but, your sweet side is so damn endearing that I'll let it slide.

 
At 8:10 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

What a special memory sweetie. Thank you for sharing it.

I was telling someone today about how my dad used to call me to talk about the geese migrating over his huge garden. It always made me giggle and sometimes I'd even roll my eyes because it was so predictable.

Now that he's gone... every damn time I see the geese flying in formation overhead I wish the phone would ring so I could hear him tell me about them one more time.

 
At 8:41 PM, Blogger Unknown said...

Thunderstorms can be magnificent. I really enjoy watching them and seldom worry about their perilous propensities.

 
At 4:05 AM, Blogger Mr. Bloggerific Himself said...

Endeering!? Hey, this might be Kentucky, but I don't care what you've heard. I've never once been with a deer. We were just friends.

 
At 7:22 AM, Blogger eclectic said...

Traci: Isn't it funny how stuff like that ingrains in your mind? Of course, now I shall think of you when I see the geese.

SSNick: I love them, too. They still don't frighten me, although I understand there's sometimes danger.

Bloggy: That's my boy!

 

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