Enigma
Accustomed as you are to providing people with reason enough to believe what they want to be true, how can I know you? You don't speak what I need to hear. If you did, would I know it as truth?
Ah, You... and your 'distractions.' Foolish one, I can't be any more distracted than I already am.
From what? Somedays I think I know, but what purpose does it serve? What purpose, indeed?
Yet, I wonder. I torment myself with the wondering, like a child enamored of stars whose telescope is but cardboard entrails of paper towels.
So then, shall we dance? And if we dance, to what music? I can't dance without it, though it plays constantly in my head. My scherzo fails to match your pulsing samba, much as I might try to direct it. And you, I can see you promenade on, oblivious... the music in your imaginings far too real for me.
31 Comments:
this. is. awesome.
I missed story time, so y'know... I improvised.
I love you even though you make me feel like a complete idiot.
I take what I said back over at M_D's about wanting your ass, abs and legs...I just want your brain and intelligence for one flipping day. ONE DAY! I'd love to be able to write like you write.
Posts like these scream that you need to update your profile as "longtime lurker of other blogs" hasn't fit for such a long time. Hindered understanding...my ass.
As usual, I likes it.
Mind blown.
Cool. Too cool. Too cool for school.
No, wait:
2 Kool 4 Skool.
Yeah. That's it.
Hello, Shari.
I know exactly how it feels to be the kid with the toilet paper telescope. But I love coming here anyway.
Sooze: But then there'd be no one who writes like YOU write, and then I'd be sad. I love you too, y'know.
Bloggy: Oh don't get all technical on me, update my profile... *sheesh* I'm technologically impaired, already. I feel successful just to have a profile.
M/D: Like how I feel when you whip off a one-liner in the gym, eh?
Scott: That's good, because I didn't know we had an assignment, and I totally would have missed turning it in.
Shawkey: Hey, I'm not the one featured in national magazines, young lady! But I'm awfully glad you like to visit -- the feeling's mutual.
Sooz, there's no reason why you can't have the bod AND the brains. If you're passing on the abs, I've for dibs.
"whose telescope is but cardboard entrails of paper towels". I like that. A lot.
...and what a profile it is...*whistles*
That last part -- you've been watching "Dancing with the Stars," haven't you? ;)
I came over from SierraBella's to say, "Frosted Flakes! heeheee"
Huh? hehehehe...I think I'm too tired for this! LOL
Wow... did you write this? Wow...
This is the second, well, ok THIRD blog I've read today that makes me feel like I'm totally outta my league with this blogging thing...
Wow.
careful, e. this kind of writing can be a gateway drug. before you know it, you'll be burning all your Journey vinyl.
Zuhn:
Bloggy: HA!
Susie: Hee! You're silly.
Traci: It's okay -- I don't really understand myself sometimes.
CK: But I don't have your smashingly funny little clowns. I had to do something! ;)
Peefer: "Scherzamba" may well be my new favorite word. And... *lightly sniffing* you smell nice, too.
Duck: It's okay Steve, he didn't mean it. I'll always love you.
I see we got the good pot today.
Wha? You want 'em? I could ship'em to ya... ;)
Limpy's comment totally cracked me up...
Limpy: You say that as if there's bad pot...
CK: Yeah, Limpy'll do that to a person. And sure, if you're shipping li'l clowns, I'll take 'em. It might entertain the li'l eclectics for awhile!
OK, I was going to email you to ask you to explain this to me, but limpy explained it. :p
GREAT post.....as always! :)
Ang
Hi E! This is awesome!!! I GET you, here. That's nice, because I don't always get my own stuff right away. The imagery is excellent. I'm taking it to bed with me!!! You rock.
This has nothing to do with this post but I was just reading your profile and wanted to let you know that The Color Purle is tied with To Kill a Mockingbird with me for my favorite movie of all time.
Angie
Wow. That was like an arrow to my brain. You smart.
Wow, I have been tied up . . . and everyone has posted new blogs. But this one has left my mind spinning.
Love ya Shari!
Susie: Limpy's got an explanation (of sorts) for nearly everything. ;)
Rick: A masterpiece? What? Have you been driving around with your eyes covered again?! J/k, thanks for the nice comment.
Angie: You're too sweet!
Lynn: Cool! I'll confess, I'm not sure I get this one, so maybe you can explain it to me?
Angie: I always identified with Scout. Best. Book. Ever.
Amy: You funny! I like that.
Nina: Funny... it left my mind spinning, too! Hope you're getting untied! ;)
Okay E, I'll 'translate' but please know that this is probably just me projecting my own crap onto someone else's work, poetry is like a painting - everyone sees something a little differently due to their own experiencing.
You seem to be addressing a person or situation that you unconsciously suspect you cannot fully trust due to a hidden agenda that is, in some way, beyond your realm of experiencing or understanding. You feel distracted because your unconscious is pre-occupied with the possible motives or hidden pitfalls around being immersed with this person or situation. The surface of this person or situation appears totally legit to the logical part of your mind - and this way, you are dazzled. You reluctantly agree to continue in a dance that you don't understand because you can't find a reason not to.
It was the imagery of the star-filled sky that I took to bed last night. Thanks for that!
Hi JDR! I'm fine, just letting my mind wander. The question is: HAVE YOU HAD THAT JELLYBEAN YET???
Lynn: That's remarkable. I just emailed you!
Did I make you speechless again? ;)
Lovely words from a lovely Eclectic.
Zuhnny: I can't believe I didn't type what I thought I had typed! Of course, maybe you DID leave me speechless. ;)
Curtis: Note to self: In Curtis' world, daft = lovely. OK -- I think I've got it! Nah, I kid... you are too sweet. Thank you!!
Scherzamba, eh? I figure you might as well really shake things up with some polka.
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